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    The inequality between rich and poor nations is now wider than it has ever before. What do you think are the main causes of this difference and what do you think can be done to reduce the gap?

    The distance between rich and poor countries is getting further rather than several years ago due to many reasons. In this essay, i would discuss these reasons, same time suggesting some solutions.
    Developed countries currently have more oppotunities to invest more in Third World, especially in technology and education. Based on the opening policy in developing nations, also the redundant workforce and Human Resource, it would be simple for rich group countries to gain profit in sold output with billions of dollar. For example, American investors have been investing in Vietnam their production – Apple brand in order to require a dependancy of Vietnamese employers on them in investing income. In addition, foreign employers also have a chance to catch talented students and domestic workers to get them study abroad in rich countries with on-top prizes. These workers or learners would get tax incitives, even for free with financial rewards and there is no more burden in finance for them. Another cause, rich countries at the moment imposing strictly immigration policy, that differed from the poor ones. Particularly in European nations, Africans on the South cannot easily cross the border by going through Mediterranean Sea like the past before. In contrast, Third World still adopting them, even taking good condition for their own study and work. This leads to a problem of paying extra cost for food of developing countries governments, whether not for the rich ones.
    To deal with, rich nations can support the poor in sponsoring food and also finance. In addition, there should be lacked of investments starting from foreigners to make local workforce not having dependancy on the income investments. To sum up, the inequality between rich and poor countries is listed by below reasons and the poor governments should impose more strictly policies in immigration and controlling the workforce.

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